read like a writer

In term 2 we did read like a writer and term 4 we learnt many things about read like a reader and writ like a writer it was the same thing but different but it was still good

1 Idea in the first paragrapher there were sad and funny moments and there were interesting things like the steam train

2 organisation in my book organisation  was when Gilbert said that dally was going to die and he did.

3 Voice

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CAMP Reflection CANBERRA

Omg it was Monday morning 6:45am I was at school and the bus arrived I knew that was it I am going to camber everyone was excited than 9 hours later we arrived in Canberra we stayed at greens hill then they said the names for the cabins I was freaking out I just wanted to be with my friends then they said my cabin Raymond Gaven Theo Giannitsis and Sam I only got one person I picked Sam and I got Sam m y friend was at the end but then we told lee to move them and they were next door so I always went to their cabin even if we weren’t meant to they gave me lollies

I gave them even if we weren’t meant to I brag heaps my friend Justyn always came to me for lollies because I only had the best lollies than Monday night we did skits and I did 3 plays first one clicking to a song 2 fishing 3 all of the year 6s it was fun than Tuesday came and we had our first breakfast in Canberra it was not nice the egg was rotten the bacon had heaps of fat but the breed was nice all I  ate for breakfast was 3 hash browns breed and cereal than came our first day in Canberra started   we first went to the embassy than film museum than at night 9- 9:30pm we went swimming at the ais Australian instursute of sport  it was fun the water in the deep end was 1.1m deep for the whole pool

but it was fun to hang with my bros IMRAN PUSHED ANGUS IN THE WATER MAKING HIM DRINK A LITER OF POAIN THAN ME AND RAYMOND GOT IN TROUBLE FOR NO REASON WE DID GIVE ANGUS A PICKIE BACK WELL I DID AND HE LOVED IT SO WHY DID I GET IN TROUBLE NO ONE WILL KNOW THAN WE WENT BACK TO OUR CABINS AND I SAW 2 KANGAROOS RIGHT OUTSIDE MY CABIN AND THEY DID NOT MOVE THAN WHEN WE GOT CLOSER THEY HOPED AWAY I THOURT THEY WERE GOING TO COME AT ME SO I SAID COME AT ME BRO THAN IT LEFT I WAS THE BIG GUY THAN WE WENT TO OUR CABINS WERE THE TEACHES SAID GO TO

SLEEP ME Sam Raymond we did not sleep we slept like to 2am we just played board games and eat candy and also talked it was fun Raymond killed a venomous spider with the shower door then Gaven had to pick it up and he flushed it down the toilet that was in the morning when we ate bad breakfast THAN WE LEFT AGAIN AND IT WAS FUN TO GET ON THE BUS THAN WE WENT TO ais and played sport than we went to camp ground and had some free time than we went to eat bad dinner than we went and saw mr Peabody and shermon than in the morning we went and had breakfast and paced our bags on the bus and headed home

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